there is more to see
well there must be
as william once said
in between the morning and the night
and the covers pulled back
and waiting to hear bless you
when you sneeze
those little things no longer there
and little words no longer said
d. mcmanus
8/31/2009
v.1
well there must be
as william once said
in between the morning and the night
and the covers pulled back
and waiting to hear bless you
when you sneeze
those little things no longer there
and little words no longer said
d. mcmanus
8/31/2009
v.1
posted by McDizzle at 8/31/2009 10:01:00 PM
1 Comments:
I especially like lines 4 - 7. The openness set up in line 4 and then how you fill that openness with the particulars of the following lines...
nice.
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