Speaking Distance
I.
Anna said she was getting married
Her hair was longer and the pudgyness was gone
That’s why no one
Went out with her before
Funny how I remembered her name
And recognized her in the dark
I said good bye knowing I’d never see her again
She probably doesn’t think about it
II.
I don’t want to live in my home town
Too many other people do
My life is weather for a dream
I.
Anna said she was getting married
Her hair was longer and the pudgyness was gone
That’s why no one
Went out with her before
Funny how I remembered her name
And recognized her in the dark
I said good bye knowing I’d never see her again
She probably doesn’t think about it
II.
I don’t want to live in my home town
Too many other people do
My life is weather for a dream
2 Comments:
Rewrite that without using pronouns... You might surprise yourself.
JB
you wrote:
"I don’t want to live in my home town
Too many other people do
My life is weather for a dream."
That is poetry, McD. Just reading back through your old work while i wait for the mason to finish my new chimbley :-)
RGS
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