Aerodynamic
I was warned
As glasses condensated
on the dark table surface
But I unfurled
And let you pull me along
You face the air
Letting it pass around you
Never a touch
Slip through
Wind and smoke
Dissapating into nothing
I was warned
As glasses condensated
on the dark table surface
But I unfurled
And let you pull me along
You face the air
Letting it pass around you
Never a touch
Slip through
Wind and smoke
Dissapating into nothing
posted by McDizzle at 3/31/2006 08:14:00 PM
1 Comments:
Smoke dissipates… I get that.
Cocktail glasses condense, and bleed liquid… I get that
Air is light.. I get it.
I don’t get the point.
I want a little more info from you.
I want to understand the situation you were/are in.
Give me something I can grasp?
Your words need to speak to the reader,
To convey a story or a message….
You are too internalized for my taste or level of comprehension.
Is that valid?
Give me more to grasp.
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